Gonna give you a couple of cinquain poems by my wip character, Mimi Crows Berkhorn.
(Cinquain is 2,4,6,8,2 syllable lines.)
From Mimi's journal entitled: People Watching
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Frenzy
charges the room
sticks you to me; you gush,
I blurt; no one listens; we spin
apart.
Human Jumping Beans
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Met up
with a talker.
She threw her words at me,
no room for input – pro or con;
Speech rape.
Captive Audience
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She has
something to prove
look at her, she's sexy
listen to her, she's smart; sexy
smart, se….
Blond Goddess
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And so you have something pretty to look at to go with the poetry - in the book that I'm going to blog about, probably Friday, she mentions Bath White Butterflies.
Aren't they pretty?
Love the cinquains AND the butterfly. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks!
ReplyDeleteAnd you said you were blocked. Pshaw.
ReplyDeleteI realized earlier today that I need to start the story in a different place. Going to ponder that as I pool walk this am.
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThat is one pretty butterfly!
DeleteI meant your poetry, you goof.
DeleteI meant your poetry, you goof!
Delete(Did I just write that twice? Well, must be that your poetry is twice as nice.)
DeleteYou wrote it twice but you were in moderation so I only approved it once.
DeleteAhh thanks for liking my, oops Mimi's, poetry.