Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Not Sunday paradelle # 2

Sunday sucked too much to write a paradelle
Sunday sucked too much to write a pardelle
the day started sweet and went straight to hell
the day started sweet and went straight to hell
a sweet paradelle started straight went to much
Sunday hell the day and sucked too write to


walking in sunny woods took away some suck
walking in sunny woods took away some suck
staring at cold lake water made the rest a memory
staring at cold lake water made the rest a memory
a suck in some water staring away the cold woods
sunny took memory made lake at rest walking

memories of the suck remain; fuel for change
memories of the suck remain; fuel for change
won't, can't go back there to that hard place
won't, can't go back there to that hard place
can't suck for that won't change the place back
memories remain of hard fuel to there; go

Judith Ann Jennings

3 comments:

  1. Sorry you had a bad day. Judy, but glad you managed to work it out in poetry!

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  2. Hope the rest of your week is going better!

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  3. Sarah - it is good way to get things out.
    Linda - I am having a much better week.

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